“ I believe what you posted made a bunch of sense. However, what about this?
what if you added a little information? I ain't saying your content isn't good, but
what if you added a title that grabbed people's attention? I
mean Iggy Azalea - Impossible Is Nothing is kinda boring.
You could glance at Yahoo's front page and see how they create news headlines to grab viewers to click.
You might add a video or a related pic or two to get people interested about
what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little bit more interesting. ”