“ I think that what you published made a bunch of sense.
However, what about this? suppose you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your content is not good, but
what if you added something that grabbed a person's attention?
I mean Iggy Azalea - Impossible Is Nothing is kinda plain. You might look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create article headlines to get
people to open the links. You might add a related video or a picture
or two to grab readers excited about everything've got to
say. Just my opinion, it could bring your website a little bit more
interesting. ”